Do you see?
23 January 2016
Do you see
The falling memories
They build lakes
Steeped in blue
The hue of moonshine
She and I were two
Did you know
Inevitable
Red meets blue
Purple tunes
The fusion of the phoenix
Rising from ashes
Child in me
Picks up drawing ink
Squaring planes
Circles twined
Profusion of connections
Slits into the soul
You are blind
Like we were once deaf
Our worlds shut
Like tight breath
Exhaling from compressed lips
Landscapes of sorrow
The silence
Communication
All dead words
In white shroud
My dark shadows lost in cloud
Nine a mere number
In your mind
Your thoughts roam alone
Path of stone
Ropes for blind
Highways grey crumbs left behind
Bricks for the tender
Trick or treat
Guessing overstayed
Underpaid
Time precious
Ticks sucking red drops of life
Amusement parks themes
Dark playgrounds
I seldom choose black
Shapes curving
Circles full
Foot ventures not on dead track
Misplaced wanderings
Truth and lies
Tilting sceneries
Wilting rose
Doubts impose
Proximity’s timed playthings
Stuffed toys for musings
Bask in light
Revered distant star
Twinkle bright
Lost the fight
We honour your corpse buried
Six blue feet under
Thieves plunder
Jewels of your chest
Show and tell
Cast a spell
Between words plastered and song
The walls hearts arrest
Clock ticks talks
Language spelt or read
Hymns for dead
Clues for child
Imagination runs wild
My aim in clear head
Do you see
The wasted morrows
They sink ships
Hidden hues
Swarms of bees suckling pristine
Sprouting of my Blues
Francesca Gagnon – Querer (Cirque du Soleil)
Una noche mas — Μία νύχτα ακόμα– YASMIN LEVY-LYRICS -Greek
Arno Elias -El corazon – Η καρδιά (greek subtitles)
The Cinematic Orchestra – Arrival of The Birds (432 hz)
I see a wonderful content here. Incredible stuff! Looking forward to read more on yours. 🙂
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Thank you Karmughil. I am glad you like the content 🙂
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My pleasure Geetha! 🙂 🙂
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Rhyming!!! Can feel the touch of sweet words 🙂
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Thank you Sakthi
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I like your combination posts of poetry and song. The two together are a natural.
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Thank you Kennedy. As I was saying once to a fellow blogger, I used to write once without music but because my poems were usually written in a certain atmosphere with specific music in the background I started sharing music too. Then the whole thing progressed to certain musics actually meaning something specific for me hence the systematic sharing of music that is meant to complement the poem. Usually the last song (if there is more than one) is meant to somehow summarise the whole matter or merely give a twist or a future outlook. Thank you for reading and liking 🙂
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Thank you for your artful expression. 🙂
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You are a true artist, spinning your letters, weaving words to create perfect lines, lines that captivate the reader. Love the images, especially that first one :). Visiting your blog is like visiting an art gallery! Love, love it, my friend 🙂
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Thank you so much my friend. I was wondering where your beautiful comments were. Darn those notification glitches. This one was woven with heartstrings so I am happy people like it and it resonates with them. That was truly a beautiful compliment. Thank you so much!
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You are welcome, my friend. I am just getting around to catching up on some reading. I read about 300 posts yesterday, commenting on a few here and there. I try to keep yours for a time when I can read closely 🙂 It’s always my pleasure, Geetha, to ready your wonderful poetry 🙂
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Fabulous poetry, bravo👏
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Thank you 🙂
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In your mind your thoughts roam alone! Such intriguing thought. You give wings to your words…
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Thank you Hemangini. That was related to communication. When you don’t voice your thoughts, people cannot understand you, so your thoughts roam alone because you have not exchanged with someone for that someone’s thoughts to be in your mind whence you would analyse them and accept or reject them
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Like silent conversations. Words left unsaid. Sad but thoughtful. Keeps one thinking. Your poems are really a genius, deep. I have to read many times sometimes because I don’t want to miss out on something so beautiful.. hehe
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Thank you that is a lovely compliment 🙂
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Pleasure is all mine Oh Great Poetess. 🙂
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How nice of you to say so. It encourages me to pour out my heart more 🙂 I hope you liked the reading too. It is a bit raw and with some background noise but I really felt the reading 🙂
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It is fabulous too. Raw is best!!
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Geetha! This is beautiful! So much longer than your normal pieces and full of beautiful word pairings! I also love that you bring back the blue and red and purple from other pieces. Just wonderful!! 🙂
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Thank you Eric, this one is very close to my heart and it overflowed that day hence the length. I am glad you liked it and the colours too. I am Blue, red is else 🙂
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beautiful poems! They are a pleasure to read 🙂
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Thank you Melinda; coming from a wonderful poet like you, that is truly a marvelous compliment 🙂
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You’re welcome and you are too kind in your praise. I am humbled you think so highly of me. I’m just sorry it took me so long to visit your site. I try to visit everyone who likes or comments on my blog every day but I sometimes miss people. I am all the poorer for that oversight because I missed out on your beautiful posts.
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Lovely imagery!
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Thank you Marissa 🙂
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Oh my i can feel the emotion… the longing.. the wanting… in every single word you’ve written..it is sooo beautiful..
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Thank you Mich. I’ve read it now and added the recording. It’s a bit of a jumble as there are some parasite noises at some points but that’s unfortunately what you get with the voice memo option of the iphone. I no longer have the nice program that used to allow for sophisticated recording and adding of images and music for youtube. I hope you like that too.
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Feelings & emotions versed in poignant beauty….Hope you are well Geetha ღ
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Thank you Mark for your beautiful words. I am well, thank you and hope you are too. I think I missed liking a poem of yours in this hectic week where I barely had the time to write and read. I have everything on email though and am reading from there so will get back to your site to comment as email only allows you to read. xoxo
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You are welcome Geetha :)…and it’s quite ok, I try not to hold expectations about my posts, mostly write as therapy…I do appreciate how considerate you always are though.ღ
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Stunningly beautiful!!! I am speechless.
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Thank you so much. This one is very close to my heart
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One can notice it, as you really transmit your feelings through these magnificent words!!
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