We
1 January 2016
We
Two worlds
Form one word
Live through spaces
Between yours and mine
From silence changing Times
Breath takes soul to other heights
Where pure and mature more than rhyme
Define crystal growth weave through our soul
Verbs nouns add verbs make my words the richer
Known blue nostalgia creeps leaves us whole
Shuttered words shivering thoughts chime
Dark split from play of bright lights
Draw maps change paradigms
Share the bread and wine
Through your traces
Knead unheard
Songbirds
We
Crystal ball – Yngwie Malmsteen
Forever One – Yngwie Malmsteen
Feeling – Edward Maya feat Yohanna A
Words with feel 🙂 Touching!!!
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Thank you 🙂
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🙂
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Beautifully romantic…i loved every word!
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Thank you, I like it too 🙂
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🙂 you are welcome and it is great to love your own work 😀
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Ah ah ah 😀
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😀 😀
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Beautifully written. Well done.
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Thank you so much :). Apologies but I did not receive a notification of your comment before and just chanced upon it now.
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No problem at all! Thanks for writing now.
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Love the contrasts….beautiful, Geetha.
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Thank you Annie 🙂
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A beautiful piece about the joining of two beautiful worlds!!
Wonderful as always, Poetess. And I enjoyed the music as well!!
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Thank you Eric 🙂 I hope the New Year brings you bliss
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You too Geetha!!
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🙂
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So much love 🙂 I love the music and the way this post takes the shape of a half diamond!
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Thank you. I love this form too. Always so much love to go around. I wonder why so many of us sometimes are blinded and go looking for the fear and unhappiness. Perhaps a poetic trait 😀 The shape is made by putting an Etheree (1 to 10 lines with respectively 1 to 10 syllables) and below it a reverse Etheree. I like it better when the 10th line of the Etheree is also the first line of the reverse Etheree
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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How lovely and romantic. Love the music too.
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Thank you, am glad you like the poem and the music. I usually put music that blends in with the poems I write but sometimes some of it stands out, not necessarily in a nice way for everyone as tastes may be different but I like it 😀
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I love your taste in music.
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Thank you, you’re such a darling 🙂
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You’re welcome. Thank you! 😉 xo
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;-*
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Happy new year Geeta ☺
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Thank you Ritu and a blessed and happy New Year to you too. I have said this so many times I don’t remember anymore to whom I have said it and who I have not said it too yet. Methinks this is going to get worse until the 15th Jan
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I know what you mean, I think I may have wished some people 10 times!!!!
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