Under the baobab tree
12 January 2016
They loved each other dearly and met under the baobab tree, just a few meters away from marshes that ended the land belonging to his family. She was dark, he was white. She was a native and he had all the rights. They did not belong together, this they knew was their social plight. Their hearts spoke a different law though. It was under the bough rich of leaves and sunshine that they carved their love in stolen letters. It was under the moon silent and blue that they met at the feet of the baobab tree.
One day his mother saw him sneak out. She figured what that was all about and soon there would be no rendez-vous. She gave him and other members of the family a piece of mind or two. Bewitched he must be, was their conclusion. She surely used sorcery some powerful infusion for she was black and small while he was tall, strong and white and their love, really, was not quite right. The county decided it was time this should stop and never again another lad to quit crop.
They say she screamed and begged for her life but they knew better. Her mouth sewn the cries shut would let them go about their holy task unfettered. She burnt brightly and though her flesh cringed and peeled not a tear nor a sigh eye and mouth revealed. When he heard he hastened broke all chains threw himself on the pyre embracing her remains. They tugged and tugged at his free arm but his body remained locked to hers by a charm. He died arm extended head flung to the skies and it was then that she released those cavernous sighs. Fire caught the baobab tree that hung near and ashes breathed into the night once the fire had cleared.
Years later at that very spot a curious couple of baobab trees grew tight as in a pot. When you look closely you can still see the stitches on her mouth and his arm extended his head flung back to shout. The blue skies shine bright and nourish them with light for now they are together and will remain so forever. On moonlit nights, you can hear her sighs plaintive and low like a baby’s cries.

Written for Friday Fiction with Ronovan writes prompt challenge. Rules and prompt here
Reading of the short story:
Wind of Change – Scorpions
More than words – Extreme
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This is amazing! The heart wants what the heart wants, at any cost. Well penned.
-Pat
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Thank you for reading and appreciating. Yes the heart will not stop until it gets what it wants whether literally or figuratively.
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Beautifully written and so great to hear your emotions come through as you read it. It has a fairy-tale feeling apt for the fairy tales day!!
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Thank you Dajena. I really felt this one very closely. Perhaps because my parents are somewhat representative of such a union but the other way around (my father is dark-skinned and she is white) and thankfully their respective families did not react with the hatred depicted here although there were quite some clashes and neighbours were quite difficult to deal with as well. I did hear of some horrendous endings to such type of love stories though, especially in rural India and Pakistan.
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Love never discriminates. It’s sad that people do. Breathtaking piece of writing
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Very true Tosha. Love is all encompassing. People react from within their mindsets which are often very limited and desirous of definitions and boundaries. Love cannot be really defined or delimited. It is and one should embrace that concept.
Thank you for reading and appreciating my friend. xoxo 🙂
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An imaginative legend
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Thank you Derrick. The image was quite inspiring. I daydream a lot, a second habit since early childhood and always saw things that did not exist like the dragons in the clouds and the bogey man in the thickets, lol. When I turned 12 I started writing, it helped to free my mind of the clutter
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You are amazingly talented. Kipling could not have done this in so few words. Beautiful.
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Thank you, what an amazing compliment. I feel elated 🙂
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Nice to see you writing in essay form. It’s a beautiful piece.
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Thank you Marissa. I have a few short stories in this blog under the menu relating to them on the top of the blog. A few were also part of novels in the making and I just left the teasers
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I love Baobab trees…
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I love them too; saw a few in and near Australia
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lucky you 😦 I have only seen them in pictures and my dreams
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I think there are some in Asia (perhaps Malaysia) so that should be close enough right?
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(sigh)
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Creative and beautiful as is all your work. i love the prose poetry and the song selections are definitely among my favourites, bringing back many memories.
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Thank you Thomas 🙂 I have actually also added now a reading of the story. I kind of got the hang of it now and think it is nicer to add an audio version. Ok perhaps not all kinds of audios, especially if song and I have a cold 😀 yet I think a read version adds some depth to the whole work
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You are welcome, Geetha! Yes, hearing someone read their work allows the listener to pick-up on the intonation and therefore makes it that much easier to capture the sentiment of a piece.
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With me it is a little tricky because I might write something in one mood and then when reading it might be inspired by another mood so it’s not really sure what you get unless I am reading right after writing. I’m irrevocably a crackpot, as mad as a hatter 😀
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lol…i hear ya….it is more effective when read after writing, however, there is something interesting that happens to words when they are written one way and spoken another 🙂
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Very true 🙂
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Your mind is amazing, Geetha. This story is gorgeous. A white Romeo and a black Juliette! Wow! And the baobab is a kind of balcony 🙂
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Thanks Monica 🙂 I am so glad people like this story because it really flowed from me. I take no credit for the baobab though as it is Ronovan’s prompt image but I do find it fascinating too. Thanks for reading and appreciating 🙂
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You’re welcome, Geetha. I think you don’t need a baobab or something else to write a story. You just need to imagine something and the story is ready 🙂
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Thank you Monica, how sweet of you to say that. It is true that my imagination runs around like a headless chicken. I live life on the intense side of things although I look outwardly normal and calm, inside a volcano of lava is constantly in eruption 😀 😀
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😀
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Wow! This is a concrete legend! How sad, how sweet and how brutal that was!
Great piece, Geetha!
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Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. I had mixed feelings about it the way it was flowing but Baobab and Australia associated together to form a certain picture in my mind and then it just had to flow.
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Yes, Stephen King said we just have to let the story flow. Because it is surely alive. 🙂
I like it, Geetha, a lot!
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How sweet and sad this is! How cruel some people are. This is a beautiful depiction of the harsh reality that still exists in some places today.
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Very true. I know of some interfaith marriages that end up as badly in rural India
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Thanks for reading and liking
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A wonderful story! ☺
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Thank you Ritu. I just finished recording it as a memo on my phone and will upload the recording now. I hope you like it too 🙂
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