In Circles of bliss
25 March 2016
I speak Blue
My canvas defined
Oceans’ words
Stretched waters
Definition who is who
Diluted in hearts
The pain starts
Within the focus
Define where
Set locus
Derive bright light from the air
Open the Lotus
We are carved
Infinity’s trails
Yet like snails
Pace deserts
Scorching sands our daily bread
Lost the divine thread
I seized it
Entrance into all
Standing tall
I was none
Witnessed how it had begun
Illusion mind game
My body
Death accessory
It paints wild
Withered lands
The throb within understands
The meanings of rain
Gone the pain
In Circles of bliss
They shine bright
Through my Heart
Target hit yet gone amiss
All flows through essence
Reading of the poem:
Manvantara – Bliss
Read this several times..such a deep feeling of searching, releasing past troubles. Lovely, Geetha.
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Thank you Eric. I am glad you liked it 🙂
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geethaprodhom.wordpress.com a beautiful, peaceful yet soul searching poem.
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Beautiful words, the poem makes me feel deep within the stars. That comment might not make sense but it is how this poem makes me feel.
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Thanks Adele. That is great news. The words are meant to awaken and attempt to rediscover our true nature by adressing issues within ourselves as well as reminding ourselves of the beauty of who we are truly despite our temporary troubles. It is wonderful if you are experiencing bliss my friend. That means you have a pure heart 🙂
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I love that last stanza. It offers hope to the afflicted
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Thank you Melinda. We are kneaded by hope and pain. They help us grow
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You’re welcome 🙂 “We are kneaded by hope and pain. They help us grow” I love that! What a beautiful, poetic reply! It’s also true
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It is true, we just need not focus on the pain 🙂
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That is sage advice 🙂
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🙂
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Ah, a happy ending. It was touch and go there for a while!
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😀 Marissa
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This is a deep one, requiring several readings, surmounting pain
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Very true Derrick! There are always several ways of looking at the same thing
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