Through Time I float
30 December 2015
Coil
Of Pearls
They entwine
Circling my throat
Freefall of white tears
Candles of light breathe low
Into bright morrows soul wakes
None walk within jaded white strides
Striped feathers sought in a safe blemish
Will of Heart strives in penance to slow Times
Mind from Heart spacing rejects tarnish
Moon beckons through rising of tides
Ghosts of spirit will quell snakes
Blank hiss that subsides slow
Withdrawal dries fears
Through Time I float
Now combine
The twirls
Foil
Where are you – Coil
I think this is one of my favorite forms you write in. You are a great Poetess, Geetha. 🙂
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Thank you Eric. What a lovely compliment to end the year on 🙂
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Not only to Iove this post, but I also love how stylized and shaped you wrote the word. Emotionaly and visually appealing.
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Thanks a lot Christian :). The form is Etheree and reverse Etheree combined. I got the form from a fellow blogger Shiva as explained in my page Etheree which also has links to other poems written in the same form.
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Deeply beautiful in perfect form!
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Thank you Thomas 🙂
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You are welcome, Geetha 🙂
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very nice poem 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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such deep, imagination and powerful words…
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Thank you Mihran 🙂
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