A roadmap to Bliss
29 November 2015
Above red roses
Where daffodils outreached sun
Inside met outside
Up the lone highway
Winding steep and weightless stones
Coloured bent footpaths
Beside pine trees’ cones
When snow caressed them silent
Shuddering branches
Brink of eagles’ reach
Under rims of silver clouds
Before the rains charged
Into depths of skies
Where bluebells held high their name
Edge of Horizons
Within fluttering
Where tidal winds braced and stole
Vanishing glances
Under still waters
Where hushed Heart painted life
A roadmap to Bliss
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I really enjoy your consistency in making use of the natural world in your poetry, especially flowers, for they epitomize life in all its struggles, fragility and beauty…in this piece the image of clouds charging for rain stands out for rain can both give and take life…as is all your work, this piece is complex, deep, open to interpretation, and beautifully written 🙂
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Thank you Thomas. I am assuming you will like Disappearing act
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You are welcome…and yes, you assume correctly 😀
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Yes, I saw your comment 😀
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🙂 🙂
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So deep in meaning and expressed beautifully!
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Thanks a lot, such a nice compliment. My new one is a bit darker though. I hope you will like it anyway when I post it. I was initially hesitating on posting it
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Glad you posted!
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It is not this one, it is another that I have yet to post called “A Journey of no return”
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I meant glad you posted this one!
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🙂
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Love the imagery. You’re so gifted.
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
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You’re welcome 😉
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Fantastic Geetha..
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Thanks Paul
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You paint such a beautiful image with those words.
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Thank you so much Annie 🙂
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