I fall through the cracks
8 January 2016
I fall through the cracks
In between tiles that shudder
Winter’s ice-clad touch
I fall through the cracks
Dropping from the wall’s peelings
That autumn rain cast
I fall through the cracks
From one ledge to another
That summer clad beige
I fall through the cracks
Where the light clung to ceilings
White like spring’s jasmine
I fall through the cracks
As the air opens its pores
Sizzling mist around
I fall through the cracks
As the skies open their arms
Shedding me sunrays
I fall through the cracks
Between needles and clock’s face
As Time slowly dies
Her Scene – This is Who I Am Now
Rumi – You will not know me
You write the most stunning imagery… ‘as the skies open their arms / Shedding me sunrays’ – just wow
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Thank you Thomas 🙂 I am glad you like the imagery. When the words flow for me they come with vivid images too, perhaps that is why it actually translates better too from my mind 🙂
ps: I am still not receiving properly all notifications of comments. Wonder what is taking WP so long to fix the bug 😀
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You are welcome, Geetha, and this is evident in your writing…I have no idea what’s up with WP…I haven’t had many issues lately but I hope the bugs are worked out soon…
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I hope so too 🙂
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🙂
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Wow, I loved each cluster. I found the refrain very effective. Beautiful!
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Thank you. I’m delighted you loved it 🙂
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🙂 welcome dear Geetha~
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🙂
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