There is more to clutter than meets the I
24 December 2015
Least
Expect
My lover
To greet a life
Blowing in a dream
Dandelions that prance
Withering in scorching flames
The core’s reduced to nothingness
Fiery wisps descending from the skies
There is more to clutter than meets the I
Forgotten, unkempt strange lullabies
Wane smiles and forced willingness
Smothering burning wings tames
Tango of minds that dance
Requiems supreme
Death in a strife
Fort giver
Reject
Beast
Chinawoman – Show me the Face
Chinawoman – Lovers are Strangers
I loved your poetry and song today. I added 10 songs to my favorite. Thank you. I hope you are having a safe and fun holiday.
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Yes I am thank you. I don’t enjoy drinking so holidays are always safe for me. I’m so glad you liked the song and were able to add many to your favourites list. I hope you had a safe and fun holiday too and that we all will continue to enjoy peaceful holidays
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I’m at home. Just relaxing and enjoying the quiet time.
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Great, enjoy!
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Absolutely beautiful
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Thank you 🙂
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You’re welcome x
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Fantastic. I love your reference to Tango. You’ve got this perfected. I take my hat off to you, again. Marvellous.
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Thank you so much Annie. I love tango. It is one of my favourite (if not the favourite) dances and I have been at it since 2006. It is always on my mind
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I remembered. I love it but sadly, I don’t do it anymore. So so beautiful.
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love this, Geetha. You really are becoming a expert with this style! I think it very much suits your poetry!
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What a lovely compliment but then again you are the knight of poetry right :)? I would not call myself an expert because I only found the form yesterday but I really like it a lot and I guess soon it will start flowing too. For nowI have had to work my flow by adding or reducing words to match the count
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This is a gorgeous etheree, Geetha!
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Thank you Thomas, I’m glad you like it 🙂
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I do, my friend…:)
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oh, and you are welcome 😀
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🙂
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not as eloquent as yours, but here’s an Etheree i wrote some tome ago 🙂
https://hooklineandinkwell.wordpress.com/2015/10/30/fall-an-etheree/
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I just read it, really lovely!
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Thank you!
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