Soffio di sale
(poema scritto in forma Senryu, tradotto in inglese qui ed in francese qui o quasotto per entrambi traduzioni)
27 settembre 2016

Sogni sottili
Fiore di vita cade
Nebbia di occhi
Petto dolente
Richiama giorni neri
Oltre memoria
Tuoi occhi scuri
Fata malinconia
Azzurri non più
Tempo passeggia
Nel ritratto di acque
Umori scuri
Mani sfiorate
Un risciaquo di acque
Soffio di sale
Raggio di sole
Risveglio del tuo viso
In felicità
“Caro/cara, tu mi accendi nel mio core” (Handel’s Faramondo)
Breath of salt
(translation into English of a Poem written in Senryu form in Italian. See original above or here)
September 27, 2016

The dreams thinning down
The flower of life falling
Fog invading eyes
The soreness of chest
Recalling the past black days
Beyond memory
Your darkening eyes
Like fairy melancholy
Now blue no longer
Time is now strolling
In the portrait of waters
The darkening moods
Hands softly touching
A rinsing of the waters
The brief breath of salt
A ray of sunshine
Awakening of your face
Within happiness
Weep you no more, sad fountains (Dowland) Anne Sofie von Otter
Un souffle de sel
(traduction en français d’un poème écrit sous forme Senryu en italien. Lire l’original ci-dessus ou ici)
27 septembre 2016

Les rêves amoindris
La fleur de vie en chute libre
Le brouillard des yeux
Les maux de poitrine
Rappel des jours noirs passés
Outre la mémoire
Tes yeux assombris
Fée mélancolie
Un bleu trépassé
Le temps qui arpente
Le portrait stagnant des eaux
Les humeurs sombres
Les mains effleurées
Le rinçage profond des eaux
Un souffle de sel
Un trait de soleil
Le réveil de ton visage
Empli de bonheur
Lully, Armide: “Les plaisirs ont choisi pour asile…” William Christie et Les Arts Florissants
This writing had my chest hurting, too. It is beautiful.
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Thank you and sorry for your chest hurting 🙂 I looked up your poetry. It is lovely!
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Bella mia cara!
JP
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Grazie JP! ❤️
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Geetha!
This is Awesome!
Shiva
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Thank you Shiva!
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Beautiful!!! The writing, artwork, and songs. Beautiful!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words! 😊❤️😘
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You are very welcome!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Lovely poem with beautiful song clippings
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Thank you Shanti
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Nicely flowing : Sleeping Beauty comes to mind
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Thank you Derrick 🙂
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