A mist to conceal
2 January 2016
A mist to conceal
Winter’s fog could lead astray
Though the sun glitters
There are roads from you to me
Splintered shuddering prayers
A mist to conceal
Gathered around clouds that cry
Below winter sky
Heart stayed thus aware aloof
While mind shredded the waters
A mist to conceal
Shuttered veil for eye of God
Whispering cosmos
Soul reached higher touched the eye
Doubt dissolves from shining Core
The Moon And The Nightspirit – The Secret Path
loved the 3rd stanza the most!
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Thank you Amit 🙂
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you are welcome Madam Poet!
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🙂
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Dream-line, ethereal, surreal…the sense that the soul must rise above what it can’t see through in order to quell doubt…stunning imagery, my friend in perfect form…love the image of shredding waters instead of treading 😀
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Heavenly and blissful… Love it along with the music and images 🙂
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Eternally reaching for the heavens. Beautiful Geetha.
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Thank you Eric
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Beautiful. Made doubts keep dissolving
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Thank you Tosha 🙂
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You’re welcome x
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