The Moon’s Death
31 January 2016

The moon shook and curled up like gentle fire. I held my hand up to her caressing the sparks, trying to cajole them back into unwinding. The night would end and if she did not unfurl her grace the sun would have a hard time rising. She resisted my touch, her eyes downcast and her lips pressed into dying denial. Beyond her head I could see the skies split into what was meant to be a sunrise but the sun had shunned the skies. I sensed his presence in the moon’s depths, beseeching her to uncurl her round petals. Behind me, the clamour of the city and wails of hungry infants were calling me back to the lands and I dropped back, helpless, drifting through the clouds.
It was a grey daylight drizzle that welcomed me as I opened my sore eyes, spent weeping for moon’s demise. The sun was nowhere to be seen, without his bride of night to glow again he was not so keen. I looked around the city from my balcony anticipating sunrise but only amorphous grey met my eyes. I realised I had to dive again into Morpheus realm and cross the rivers of the shades of the night to try to coax her again into undying so the sun could shine his light.
When I emerged on the other side, the strangest sight met my eyes. The moon was lying down roaring with laughter as the sun was tickling her feet with his rays. Her woes of the night forgotten she seemed much besotted and the sun could barely contain his heat as he beamed at her, happy she was finding back the fun in the nights. Around them, the clouds were awash with a buzz of curiosity and anticipation – which explained the grey drizzle of that morning. I cleared my throat and asked timidly if we could finally have some shine and they could choose which one would go for it. When I left, they were sorting it out with a match of rocks, scissors and papers.
My eyelids fluttered, warmed by the sun’s beckoning. I woke up to another gorgeous sunny morning. All was well in the skies.

Reading of the flash fiction :
Written for Friday fiction with Ronovan writes https://ronovanwrites.wordpress.com/2016/01/29/friday-fiction-with-ronovan-writes-prompt-challenge-11/
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What a lovely compliment Neel. Thank you so much. I hope you keep enjoying.
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[…] The Moon’s Death Geetha Balvannanathan (Geetha Balvannanathan’s Blog) Another take on celestial beings. Such a creative take on the prompt. It amazes me where a suggestion can take a person. 366 words, 6.8 GL, and 10% passive sentence structure. @geethap2007 […]
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Beautiful dreamer you are, thanks for sharing this, so ethereal and so soothing to the soul.
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Welcome and thank you so much Janni 🙂
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I am in awe of your unending supply of creativity! The sun, moon and the universe in general is overwhelmingly inspirational and you play with these giants gracefully…
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Thank you for your very generous words my friend. Am grateful that you pass by, read and comment 🙂 . Hopefully you are well
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Don’t thank me, thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts. Thanks for asking, I am well:)
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Well I guess I’ll say welcome then 😀 Great to hear you are well and I hope all is also progressing on track for you 🙂
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Such a wonderful story, Geetha. Your story telling is great!!
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Thank you Eric 🙂
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Your lines of prose are so poetic. I love the descriptive nature of this and how is all feels like a dream. The image of the sun tickling the moon made me smile. Beautiful work, Geetha 🙂
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Thank you Thomas for your lovely words. Was trying to depict that despite death or the potential of death there is hope and the potential of life too, if we so choose.
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You are welcome, Geetha. Yes, if we choose!
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loved this.
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Thank you Adele
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Hypnotising, Geetha.
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Thank you Annie 🙂
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I love this! beautiful. Coincidentally, my response to the challenge has the sun as the main character but nothing in the realm of your writing. Really well written!
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Thank you so much. I will read your entry this evening.
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You’re welcome, and thanks!
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Brillant
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Thank you
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You’re welcome. xx
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Xoxo
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What a wonderful story: the sun and moon as a celestial couple…at first there is a hint of tragedy for the moon, and then a complete turn around with a frolicking sun! I’m so glad they will be shining again (after the rock, paper, scissors bout.) Great story 🙂
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Thank you so much. Celestial couples can be strange and the moon such a Diva 🙂 I am so glad they are shining too 🙂
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Oh wow. 💕💕💕
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Thank you Sarah 💕💕💕
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Of course! 😊
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I agree! Geetha, this is fantastic! I love the unique spin you put on this and the loving care you lavished the piece.
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I second this. Wow.
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Thank you Annie 🙂 🙂
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You’re welcome, Geetha. Your words are mesmerising.
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Thanks again 🙂
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Thank you so much Melinda. I was very much in love mode for the moon when I wrote it 🙂
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I can tell! You’re welcome 🙂
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