A Beautiful Lie
12 December 2015

Sally liked to eat spinach. She liked it so much that she had it cooked in various types of dishes and toured the world in search of new recipes to try out – not really of course but in her head, silly, or she would probably be eating something else than just spinach.
Sally was lonely. How could it be anything else? If her parents had named her Chappy perhaps she would have been happy or if her parents had made her a boy, perhaps her life would be filled with Joy but no, they had made her a girl and named her Sally predestining her to be lonely. Come to think of it, had she been a boy and had they named her Vlad, she might have been sad. Then again she might also have been glad or mad, which she was most certainly boy and Vlad or not.
Now enough of all that emotional nonsense and back to some fitting and filling food like spinach for instance. As I said, Sally liked to eat spinach and you might even say she was obsessed by spinach to the highest degree. If she were a King – or a Queen for that matter, she had again lost her head would have said the hatter, forgetting that she was a girl after all – she would make sure to issue a decree that spinach be eaten by all and that it be served throughout the kingdom for free.
Sally had no kingdom though or at least none that others could see. Her friend the hatter saw it of course but that did not count any more than the crown on her head did because none could see hatter either. So Sally the lonely – hatter excepted – Queen with a kingdom that none could see sat at her table eating spinach. Of the finest sort it was, the spinach – at least hatter and her were both of the same opinion.
- Two is a company you know hatter she said.
- Well of course dearest queen and best spinach eater of all my friends
- Am I your bestest friend hatter?
- You’re my bestest best friend ever.
- Do I look like a beautiful queen?
- You are the fairest queen ever in this kingdom. Cross my heart with a piece of silver if I lie to you; please my Lady. Times are tough
Sally looked up at hatter but it was not he really who had said that nonsense. He was not used to saying such nonsense you know. Anybody who knew him would tell you that. It was a man standing in front of her table his face looking like it could really do with some spinach to put some colour back into the pale of it which spread everywhere except the tip of his nose that was bright red.
- Would you like some spinach, she volunteered
- No ma’am
- But I am sure you will feel much better
- I am sure you will feel better eatin’ that spinach an’ all yerself ma’am and I’d hate to spoilt it for ya
- Oh well, I guess you’re right but I don’t have any silver for you, just perhaps a pound or two but tell me what will you do if I give one of them to you?
- I should buy me some food ma’am
- That sounds reasonable but I still don’t understand why you don’t just eat it right here and now as this spinach is really a treat
The man with the face shuffled and kept quiet eyeing her purse so Sally took one pound out and gave it to him feeling like Florence Nightingale handing out some life-saving medicine. She held back and smiled a wide smile at him
- Do I look like a beautiful Queen?
- The most beautiful queen ever ma’am
- Am I your best friend now?
- You’re my best friend ever ma’am
She gave him the pound the large smile still on her lips and as she gazed at him disappearing, she caught a glimpse of herself in the rear-view mirror of a car. A big chunk of spinach was stuck in the middle of her teeth colouring her smile and her hair looked like she had just wrestled with a wildcat. She looked up searching for the clown-faced man and found him entering the pub across the street, an arm raised already ordering his daily dose or so it seemed. So much for honesty she thought. She checked her reflection again and smiled a green smile. It was still a Beautiful Lie.

A Beautiful Lie – 30 seconds to Mars
This post is part of the FRIDAY FICTION with RONOVAN WRITES Prompt Challenge #5
Ping back and rules here
The idea is to write a short story using as title the title of a song you like. For me it was A Beautiful Lie
Please feel free to comment. This is my first attempt at short fiction and I have difficulty writing concisely in prose although I have made progress in writing short in poetry thanks to the Japanese forms of tanka, haiku and senryu. I am aware I am still a stretch from actual flash fiction 😀
Enjoyed this take in the challenge!
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I did have fun writing it, thank you! 🙂
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[…] A Beautiful Life by Geetha Prodhom (Geetha Balvannanathan’s Blog) A wonderful nonsensical sort of tale about Spinach and a lonely young lady. I wonder if the spinach has anything to do with the lonely part? Although I love spinach, as does my son. 756 words at a GL of 6.4. […]
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Thank you so much. I actually wondered as well if she ought to give up spinach altogether or maybe just quickly clear her teeth before she smiles; some obsessions are hard to break 😀
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Unique and entertaining. 🙂
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Thank you, am glad you found it funny 🙂
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Really unusual. Loved it.
JP
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Thank you Jean-Pierre 🙂 I love your recounts too. They put me in a good mood.
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Your energy and creativity knows no bounds. What a wonderful way to start my day, Geetha. You have a beautiful mind.
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What a fantastic compliment, a beautiful mind. I love the movie so your compliment is even more meaningful to me. Have a wonderful day ahead Annie 🙂
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I speak the truth. You too, Geetha. Up since 5. I’m working out shortly so trying hard to inhale my porridge and berries. It’s not raining and this is good.
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Yes we do and that too brings us together 🙂
Enjoy your porridge if you can – I never could. We had a “spell of rain” like the UK knows “spells of sunshine”. The grass got barely wet 😀
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It’s fair to say that we’ve had little rain here in the East throughout the summer months. I am grateful for the amount of sunshine and for the kind that allows you to still be able to work outside without melting into a little puddle.
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Here rain the whole year through is a scarcity and when it happens, people are so unprepared that you have accidents and the roads blocked with water 😀
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It’s the extremes that always cause the problems.
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Yes, in everything
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Exceptional and very entertaining.. I really enjoyed.. Very well written.. Go Geetha.. 🙂
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Thank you Paul. How very sweetly encouraging of you 🙂
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I think you are making a good leap from poetry to prose…I love the way you have presented this scenario…how many of us are guilty of offering beautiful lies in a life time 🙂
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It’s always OK when it is a white lie they say 😀 Thank you Thomas. I have written a few stories but this was an attempt to write a really short one or flash fiction as Ronovan calls it
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Yes, that’s what they say 🙂 I haven’t written many short stories at all. I commend your wanting to continue to push yourself to write in different genres.
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Thank you. I wrote just now another short story as this idea of flash fiction sort of got to me finally. I will publish it soon, just the usual running around at this time with my son and some odd things to do so I might not post it right away.
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You are welcome…I look forward to reading it when you do and enjoy the running around 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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You are welcome 🙂
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