Into Other Life
14 December 2015
Trapped in white
I have gone too far
Into Death
Wasted Breath
Heaving chest inhales a star
The loss of Colour
Paint Darkness
Across burning lids
Dazzling bright
Purple light
Crawl into my loneliness
The loss of this World
Hovering
Above silver skies
Shivering
Baleful lies
Stare me in the eyes that weep
Universe that whirled
Now I fade
Dazzling angels reach
Into me
My eyes wade
In rivers of priests that preach
Untold stories’ strife
Bring me back
I am losing touch
Withered toes
Churning throes
Take my keyboard and quick hack
Into Other Life
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Geetha Balvannanathan's Blog - Isis Tratum 
Ah, yes, what a great use for this form, Geetha…this is beautiful penning, my friend 🙂
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Thank you Thomas 🙂
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You are welcome, Geetha 🙂
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🙂
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What a rushing wind flows with your words Geetha!! I loved the imagery of: Shivering /Baleful lies.
Your pen pictures strong feelings!
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Thank you Dajena, what a lovely compliment 🙂
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I enjoy reading your words all the time! 🙂
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Thank you 🙂 I enjoy reading yours too
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🙂
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Beautiful, Geetha. I love your style ❤
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Thank you Monica 🙂 This is written in Shadorma form, something I found out about on FT Ledrew’s blog (https://hooklineandinkwell.wordpress.com/2015/12/12/captured-2/)
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“Heaving chest inhales a star”
God. You sure know how to capture my imagination, Geetha.
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Thank you Tony, that is a big compliment 🙂
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